Thursday, April 4, 2019

anzac day poem.


hi i am meka and we make this poem for the people how were in the war.
so on the day they went to war we sport the people how diy  in the war.so
we make a poem. we pot the words anzac day and then we make sentence
what we think heaped in the war and so that is why we did a poem.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Meka, it's Pyper from St Patrick's. I really like your poem Meka!! I find it very nice and easy to read. I like how you started off every sentence with a different word. Maybe next time you could look over it before publishing.

    Blog ya later!!!

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