Ka rawe Meka! What amazing work you have done. You have clearly put a lot of thought into your ending and as a result have written it like a true story teller. Next time you could read your work out loud to check where the full stops go. Keep up the great mahi! Miss Farr
Hi Meka, I liked your story ending. It painted a picture in my head, like good stories do. Maybe next time just give quick re read to make sure spelling is right. I look forward to seeing more of your work. You are a great writer. Sharron
Ka rawe Meka! What amazing work you have done. You have clearly put a lot of thought into your ending and as a result have written it like a true story teller. Next time you could read your work out loud to check where the full stops go.
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Miss Farr
Hi Meka, I liked your story ending. It painted a picture in my head, like good stories do. Maybe next time just give quick re read to make sure spelling is right. I look forward to seeing more of your work. You are a great writer. Sharron
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